Thursday, June 4, 2009

Phoenix - Rise From The Ashes



I can feel my life draining out of me; but I wait...
I wait for you to come,
Come and rescue me from this plight
I beg for you to come,
Come and fulfil my dreams,
I yearn for you to come,
Come and take me away from this misery
You're my salvation, my life, my entire being
You rebuild me, refine me,
You undo me, and move me,
you re-define everything i was
I am, And what I will be,
For you're my saviour,
my light in the darkness
I stumble and fall,
I follow you, I lose you, I find you,
and I follow you again
I feel myself wasting away,
I feel myself burning,
I feel you wanting me to burn, to hurt,
I feel you wanting me to change who I was,
and believe in what I will be.
I burn...
I burn for your love...
with your love...
and because of your love,
I burn and I'm destroyed
I cease to exist
You show me the light,
You show me my salvation,
You show me who I am,
what I'm meant to be,
And I'm reborn, reborn from the ashes,
reborn to you, for you,
now and forever...

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Dil-e-naadaan tujhe huaa kya hai?
Aakhir is dard kee dawa kya hai?
:)

wonderful my friend!

Nice..Commented on beep beep one as well...but kya harjaa dubaaraa comment karnay ka same cheez par :p
Because that is amazing...
Hatss off to U :D
Only problem is that i need to get a hat first ;D
But that is amazing.. the way u write is amazing (three times i've used the same word hahaha)
Wonderful stuff... keep it comin :D

wow thats adorable and ♥ amazing like you hehe ♥ Your so talented Ubaid...you should be a writer and enter competitions...

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@AD:
Thanks alot buddy :)


@Altamash:
hahaha thanks...


@Anonymous:
I will be, inshallah i will be :)

thanks

This poem should be for Creator.
He shows the way we should walk and give strength to do.
He turns us back to the right way after we fail again and again with a great mercy.
And the real love is the love felt for God.