There's no one around
as I stand here in the snow.
It's so quiet,
I hear every breath I take.
I look around
and my heart aches.
I want you here beside me...
My hands
are frozen numb,
I wish I could have it in yours,
we'd warm eachothers.
I can barely feel my lips,
but if you were here
to kiss them,
I'd regain some feeling.
I just want you
to hold me here,
until I can no longer
feel the cold
as I stand here in the snow.
It's so quiet,
I hear every breath I take.
I look around
and my heart aches.
I want you here beside me...
My hands
are frozen numb,
I wish I could have it in yours,
we'd warm eachothers.
I can barely feel my lips,
but if you were here
to kiss them,
I'd regain some feeling.
I just want you
to hold me here,
until I can no longer
feel the cold
14 Critics:
brilliant
thanks alot :)
VERY well written. Made me long for a kiss too!
I've two words for it... (:
Cold. Beautiful.
Cold as snow..!
Innocent as love..
Just beautiful!!! :)
@Ki:
thanks alot :)
@Momal:
yeah well its very hot on my side ;)
@Fiducia:
thanks alot, especially thanks for commenting on every upload :)
needs to wear a warmer/ upper/ jacket ...
@Asma:
baizaar log :p
You're really good with poetry. Where do you find the inspiration? O_O
@Concealedpearls:
I am not much great, but thanks for appreciating....
and my inspiration, hmmm my past, and my heart is my inspiration and now the time has come that i just close my eyes and start writing!!
by the way welcome to the blog :)
oustanding ... Yaar
feel so nice at your blog buddy
Ah, I like the transparency of this piece. The way you explained and probably linked weather to the mood-set, and then providing a lovable solution to it - fantastic! Well done! Keep writing!!!
Very nicely written :]
The image is wowish!
@YouTee:
thanks alot, and i hope you keep coming over!!
@Brosreview:
thanks alot, all my manipulations are according to what i write, by the way welcome to my blog :)
@Smiley:
thanks alot dude...
and welcome to my blog :)
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