Friday, February 18, 2011

Murder Scene



I know, what it means to be alive,
I won't give in, no matter how hard it tries
But this is a murder scene...

A scene where I burn,
burn in your memories,
burn in your love,
burn while having the desire to hold you...

This is a murder scene,
created by me indeed...
a scene containing
flame
burn
and ashes
of us...


© Ubaid Ullah Ahmed

3 Critics:

The intesity of the poem... uff. loved it.

Intense. Hot lighter i must say!

@Mia:
Thanks maryam, dil say jo likhta houn :P


@Lizzie:
Thanks, lol new interest that I developed ;)